This actually works as a bit of flash fiction rather than a WIP. A singular moment of time, making one question what the situation is.

Wonderful usage of color to perceive the emotions!

I absolutely love talking about sleep as something hiding from you instead of something you cannot get. It really evokes a sense of sentience in the unsentiant.

And obviously the rebuilt Miri Lee is Yue's grandmother! I did spot an "alright" though! :blobglare:

Ooh, caff, I love the last two lines. lullabies and lull both start the same, and their rhyming nature to null I feel gives it a secondary level of meaning. Do you think you could expand this to the other lines? Like, with moon, maybe moonlight one line, moon the next?