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I Ran
In Short Stories
Meli ran
Jun 23, 2022
This actually works as a bit of flash fiction rather than a WIP. A singular moment of time, making one question what the situation is.
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Hue
In Poems
Meli ran
Jun 23, 2022
Wonderful usage of color to perceive the emotions!
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Spiraling
In Poems
Meli ran
Jun 22, 2022
I absolutely love talking about sleep as something hiding from you instead of something you cannot get. It really evokes a sense of sentience in the unsentiant.
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The Magpie's Nest
In Short Stories
Meli ran
Jun 21, 2022
And obviously the rebuilt Miri Lee is Yue's grandmother! I did spot an "alright" though! :blobglare:
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under the moon
In Poems
Meli ran
Jun 21, 2022
Ooh, caff, I love the last two lines. lullabies and lull both start the same, and their rhyming nature to null I feel gives it a secondary level of meaning. Do you think you could expand this to the other lines? Like, with moon, maybe moonlight one line, moon the next?
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